Alyssa Evans

Alyssa Evans.

Earlier this month, we asked readers to send in short pieces of fiction to start a weekly fiction writing contest. Throughout the summer, we’ll feature local writers who send in responses to prompts published in this column.

Hammond resident Chantal Knudson’s entry will start things off. To contribute to the story, send in a response to the following prompt. Please keep responses no longer than 250 words. Send your work to

Coast Weekend readers will be able to respond to future prompts, in turn creating a fictional story, separated by short chapters.

“My goal is for other Astorians to use their 21st century intellects to share Astoria’s history in the genre of historical fiction as they respond to my prompt,” Knudson said. Below is her prompt.

‘Back to the Astorian Future: 1811 to 2020’

The year 2020 in Astoria changed how humans interact with others physically and socially. But is it so new?

Time to climb in and program our time machines (a tricked out Tesla car is my choice) for March 22, 1811. Join me as we imagine our Tesla hurtling itself at 88 miles per hour towards the end of the 14th Street pier. Instantaneously, the pier where Capt. Fritz Elfving ferried people from Astoria to Megler, Washington is gone. The Tesla screeches to a halt bogged down by the sand and grass.

I am at the wheel. You are seated in the passenger seat. Hanging on the rearview mirror are two masks. You reach over to grab one, but I stop your hand.

“Look outside! What do you see?” I ask. “Do you think we have to wear our masks now?”

Instead of answering me, you grab it and exit the time machine. I follow.

You turn to me and say skeptically, “Are you saying we traveled back to 1811? Is this a dream or a lit (Gen Z slang for enjoyable or exciting) ‘80s movie?”

We see a wood hulled ship with three masts struggling to cut through the churning water. That must be the Tonquin! The American ship sent by John Jacob Astor to start a fur trading post in Astoria. Just then, we see 20 Clatsop and Chinook tribal canoes speed towards the ship.

“Hmmm. I wonder if we can help.”

Recommended for you

(0) comments

Welcome to the discussion.

Keep it Clean. Please avoid obscene, vulgar, lewd, racist or sexually-oriented language.
Don't Threaten. Threats of harming another person will not be tolerated.
Be Truthful. Don't knowingly lie about anyone or anything.
Be Nice. No racism, sexism or any sort of -ism that is degrading to another person.
Be Proactive. Use the 'Report' link on each comment to let us know of abusive posts.
Share with Us. We'd love to hear eyewitness accounts, the history behind an article.